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Mitsume Temo pilot manga - page 28-29 by Takisse Mitsume Temo pilot manga - page 28-29 by Takisse
In this double page you will find part of the core lore of Mitsume Temo series.
There will be other explaining pages later as well, but this one is really important.

And thank you all for keep reading us!
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Randommode Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That is a good story 
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HyaKkiDouR4n Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm surprised that Bibirba is the one apparently more scared by aliens. She's the one building giant robots!

Anyway, these two pages have a quite interesting setup.And it's pretty funny.
If I want to nitpick, I can say that maybe the whole playground thing is a bit too abrupt. Maybe a very short scene with Pipo at the start or a slight rewrite of the spaceship dialog could have introduced this a bit more smootly.

But hey, some comics expect us to buy ninja turtles with one page of explanation, so I guess you're far from being the worst offender. XD
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kaminene Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fermi tutti ma bibirba ha paura degli alieni? D:
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YukiOshi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Il martellone... -___________-
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